It’s Jell-O Brand Sugar-Free Cat Food!

Feb 28
2010

First, let me say that my wife and I have bought this and find it very tasty. In fact, we highly recommend it.

But the fact remains that we bought it despite this ad in the January 18, 2010 issue of People magazine. Why? Because the main visual makes the product look like cheap, private-label cat food. All that’s missing is a little gelatinous film around the edges. Sure, I read the ad and realized that it is, in actuality, yummy low-calorie chocolate mousse. By then the damage was done, however.

If it wasn’t for our long–and mostly positive–experience with the Jell-O brand, I promise you we would’ve passed on this, big-time.

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Great Meat, Groan-Inducing Ads

Feb 20
2010

Boar’s Head. How I love and hate thee.

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Omit needless words! Omit needless words!

Feb 12
2010

“Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.”  – William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White, The Elements of Style.

Back when I taught aspiring young copywriters, this was one of my ongoing refrains. Such it continues to be that when I see something like this–on a PIN pad at the Ikea in Tampa–it jumps out at me. It’s as if the pad assumes I not only have a secret PIN, but also one that I give out to strangers.

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